by Terrance Dicks
DOCTOR WHO AND THE ABOMINABLE SNOWMEN
First published 21 November 1974*, which puts it between Planet of the Spiders and Robot
*http://tardis.wikia.com/wiki/Doctor_Who_and_the_Abominable_Snowmen
"Path of obedience, indeed. Victoria had her own ideas about that"
It’s book number one! It’s the first out-of-time Doctor in the novelisations (perhaps in any form), building up nicely to the TV show shedding the trappings of the last five years! And, disappointingly, there’s not a lot to be said about it. Dicks is as usual immaculately clear and pacy in his rendering but he doesn’t seem to be making any special effort for this special occasion.
One possible exception here emerges, based entirely on my reading of a line in Running Through Corridors, on how, where the TV serial throws suspicion around the monastery a bit about who is the Great Intelligence’s agent, the novelisation makes it clear from the start that Padmasambvha is the inside man and plays Khrisong’s attempts to solve the situation through this prism. This might be because Dicks feels there is greater tension in the reader being ahead of the characters but I feel there’s more evidence that he views the alternative as too complicated in the way that the book’s many Jackanory-style moments are employed to make sure the reader is definitely up to speed.
The sphere’s journey across the monastery in search of the deactivated Yeti gives the longest running example of this: it starts with an assurance that it will ‘get there in the end’; includes reminders, such as ‘“That sphere couldn’t have moved off on its own” […] the little silver sphere was doing exactly that’; and provides a final reinforcement after it’s happened - ‘the catastrophe they feared had already happened’. Hypnotism, however, seems to be the most complicated aspect of the story to Dicks’s mind, with strict reminders of how people have been influenced (‘Thomni believed he was speaking the truth—his visit to the Inner Sanctum had been wiped from his mind’) and exactly who’s influenced who and in what order: ‘The Abbot Songtsen was indeed busy about his preparations. Obeying the orders placed in his mind by Padmasambvha, who was himself performing the wishes of the Great Intelligence they both served’. It would appear that Dick’s special effort for this special occasion comprises of decluttering the stories of the past. Which meant I had to find something else to catch my eye while I read this.
What’s thrown into greatest relief, then, by this first step outside the Pertwee, and therefore the Letts/Dicks, era is Dicks himself. It’s easy on TV to pass over the way he has a very particular view of the Doctor, partly because of how the character is so filtered through the actors and other creative figures and partly because he won. It feels more obvious in the books, largely because he’s the only writer so far to not call him Doctor Who. In fact he stresses that the character’s ‘known only as the Doctor’, making him rather more ‘mysterious’ than the surname Who does (which manages to be simultaneously mundane and, well, just crap) and proving substantially less awkward when he is treated as a figure from legend: ‘I waited so long, Doctor. I knew you would come, and save me from myself...’.
Like Pertwee, this Doctor can carry himself with authority (when he chooses) and possesses a selection of abilities beyond those of a bog-standard human, sensing ‘the presence of some alien evil’, capable of ‘amazing strength’ and able ‘to tamper with the mind’ to similar effect as the Great Intelligence. There’s even a hint at the power to change history’s course, revealed to be in his reach but beyond humanity’s in Doctor Who and the Day of the Daleks: ‘Man cannot alter his destiny’. However, he’s less obviously heroic compared with the third Doctor – ‘he considered going straight back to the TARDIS’ – and more contradictory in his nature, one minute acting ‘like a small boy’ and another revealing ‘something of the serenity of the holy ones’. Speaking of which, his ‘space vicar’ aspect is no longer so didactic, influencing attitudes rather than teaching specific behaviours (‘Don’t give up, whatever you do […] It’s a splendid thing to have a dream’), and this less Anglican approach allows him to seem genuinely ‘amazed’ rather than just patronising when reacting to Jamie and Victoria’s ignorance of the ghanta.
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But more than the Doctor, Dicks creates the role of the companion as it stands for much of the 70s and 80s. This has some problems. The most obvious is that, as Phil Sandifer observes, ‘He’s crap with women’. And, just to make sure you don’t think he’s being harsh, here’s Terry himself: ‘Somewhat to my disgust, there was the onset of feminism’. Even as a joke, and it must be said he does look like he’s barely concealing a wry smile as he says it, it does suggest he’s not overly concerned with how female characters might translate as role models. There are many passages in Doctor Who and the Abominable Snowmen that make you think he wasn’t joking, from the Doctor’s unspoken collusion with Jamie to keep his fear of danger from Victoria at the beginning to the Doctor’s pronouncement of Victoria’s uselessness in his own head at the end (‘she was only being included in the expedition because she would find it even more frightening to be left on her own’). And Dicks definitely isn’t just setting the Doctor up as overbearing, what with Victoria’s expressions of fear, her seemingly physical reliance on Jamie when faced with danger, tugging at and clutching him, and her interior monologue at the Yeti cave which so closely mirrors the Doctor’s when approaching the Inner Sanctum: ‘Victoria decided that she was more frightened of being left outside than of going in’.
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Luckily, that Dicks quote from the Time Warrior DVD can be extended - his disgust at feminism is apparently due to not being able to get away with just strapping the heroine to circular saws and railway tracks any more. In other words, he’s just annoyed at having to do more with the female companion than simply use her as ‘a plot device’, a tendency seldom more obvious than when Victoria escapes her cell and then is ‘uncertain what to do with herself once she was free’. Yes, she’s a peril-monkey who does things simply because the plot needs them to happen (an idea inserted into the series’ DNA by Sydney Newman before it had even started) but, importantly, she does things rather than just having them done to her – even the most transparent example of her lack of agency, where she gets hypnotised by the Great Intelligence to keep begging to leave the monastery happens because she’s conspired to be ‘the first in many hundred years to look upon the face of Padmasambvha’.
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She is in fact a character motivated by curiosity, thrill-seeking (she actually jumps up and down with excitement) and such a sense of ‘mischief’ that the monks dub her a ‘devil-girl’. Ideally she would tread a constant tightrope, ‘half-fearful, half-fascinated’; sadly, she manically bounces between the extremes. However, this is a massive improvement on both Hulke and Letts, both of whom have featured strong female characters in their books (Miss Dawson got an improved presence as did Miss Travis in Doctor Who and the Cave Monsters and Doctor Who and the Dæmons made Miss Hawthorne the alter-Doctor; Dicks, meanwhile, managed a slight neutering of Anat) but obliterated the female companion (completely in Hulke’s case; Letts, meanwhile, simply reduced Jo to a simpering flesh-lump of loyalty).
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Phil Sandifer’s defence of Dicks is that, despite the issues in his worldview, his ‘tendency to shy away from the definitive’ allows a ‘pragmatic ambivalence’ that ‘lets him change his mind and move forward’, which I interpret as his basically saying that Dicks’s instinct is to always keep his options open, never committing to fully to projecting his own attitudes and able to adjust to his audience (I say interpret; I mean rephrase). I’d go further. Dicks won’t allow anything to compromise a story and here, stepping outside the Pertwee era for the first time and finding himself confronted with a female companion who must act of her own accord in ways which drive the plot forwards, he accepts that and embraces it as fully as he did the Controller’s change of mind in Doctor Who and the Day of the Daleks. If Victoria’s going to do adventurous things, she’s going to be an adventurous character.
And so, despite a pair of opening descriptions which very much get the companions the wrong way round, Dicks can’t help but make Victoria a contrast Jamie; it’s Jamie who loyally hunts for the ghanta as the Doctor instructed but it’s Victoria who actually allows the story to move forwards by finding it and it’s Victoria who’s ‘entranced’ to find herself in the Himalayas whilst Jamie parochially asserts the patent untruth that ‘there were bigger and better mountains at home in Scotland’. Yes, Jamie gets his moment to shine, leading a group of monks in capturing a Yeti, but he only does it because the Doctor requests it, never actually engaging in the situation except at his friends’ prompting. Victoria, meanwhile, can’t help but keep engaging with her surroundings just to keep at bay the seemingly constant threat of encroaching boredom that comes from within her.
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This isn’t such a surprise if we consider Dicks’s view of the companion as opposed to his of the heroine: ‘the companions have a practical use in that it enables you to split the story from time to time’. This makes the companion a second protagonist when they are separated from the Doctor and it is Victoria, not Jamie (who I don’t think ever leaves his side), who enjoys that privilege. Accordingly, since she is performing the same function as the Doctor in her plot-strand, she has moments which mirror him: playing on Jamie’s wish to not appear afraid when she wants to explore, much as the Doctor later does with the Great Intelligence when he wishes to confront it; or needing to be talked into a more sensible course of action when her enthusiasm inclines another way.
Whatever Dicks may say (and, indeed, whatever he might do, as there are some horrible bits around Victoria in here), by making the leap that the second protagonist should be a mini-Doctor (one that shares his characteristics just not his knowledge and experience) he rewrites Newman’s ‘kid’ into the most frequently reoccurring future companion-type, a bit low in the mix with Sarah and Leela, a bit high in the mix with K9 and Romana and then an actual character arc for Ace (as possibly intended), Rose and Clara.
‘Professor Travers still has “bad guy” written all over him, hasn’t he? He has a line where he seems to give himself away (Now I must make a… find out for sure”) […] We’re never allowed to shake the feeling that Travers is hiding something’
Rob Shearman and Toby Hadoke, Running Through Corridors 1
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‘It had a long way to go. The Great Hall was in a distant part of the Monastery. But it would get there in the end’
‘“Well, one thing’s certain, Doctor,” she told him. “That sphere couldn’t have moved off on its own.” She had no idea that, in a corridor not far away, the little silver sphere was doing exactly that’
‘Unaware that the catastrophe they feared had already happened, Jamie and the Doctor set off down the mountainside’
‘Thomni believed he was speaking the truth—his visit to the Inner Sanctum had been wiped from his mind’
‘The Abbot Songtsen was indeed busy about his preparations. Obeying the orders placed in his mind by Padmasambvha, who was himself performing the wishes of the Great Intelligence they both served’
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‘a mysterious traveller in Space and Time known only as the Doctor’
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Padmasambvha: ‘I waited so long, Doctor. I knew you would come, and save me from myself...’
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‘As the Doctor entered the courtyard with Travers, he took in the ugly situation at a glance. In times of crisis, his normally modest and unassuming personality took on a new force’
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‘For a moment he considered going straight back to the TARDIS. All around him he sensed the presence of some alien evil’
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‘Despite his modest size, the Doctor could exert amazing strength when he needed to’
‘Jamie looked at him with respect. “I didna realise you could do that sort of thing, Doctor.” “I don’t like to do it, Jamie. It’s a serious thing to tamper with the mind. But in an emergency like this...”’
‘The Abbot looked at him pityingly. “You have not failed, my son. This disaster was written. Man cannot alter his destiny”’ – no, but the Doctor can!
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‘He looked pleadingly at them, like a small boy begging to be allowed to go out and play’
‘The face was gentle and relaxed with something of the serenity of the holy ones themselves about it’
‘“Don’t give up, whatever you do,” urged the Doctor. “It’s a splendid thing to have a dream... even if it does turn out to be a legend” […] “Do you think he’ll catch his Yeti, Doctor?” asked Victoria. “That doesn’t really matter,” said the Doctor gently. “The important thing is, he’s found his dream again”’
‘“what’s a ghanta?” Victoria asked gently. The Doctor was amazed. “You mean you don’t know?”’
‘He’s crap with women. I mean, really, properly crap, in a way that deserves far more criticism than it gets’
http://www.eruditorumpress.com/blog/you-were-expecting-someone-else-25-made-of-steel/
A smirking Terrance Dicks: ‘Somewhat to my disgust, there was the onset of feminism, you see. Now, Barry, Barry was okay with this, you know’
Beginning the End (DVD of The Time Warrior)
‘Jamie looked at him. “You’ve seen something, haven’t you? Out there?” The Doctor glanced quickly at Victoria. ‘Oh, nothing really, Jamie. Probably nothing”’
‘“What about me?” asked Victoria. “What do I do?” “Nothing, I hope,” said the Doctor briskly. “But you never know. Something may turn up.” He hadn’t the heart to tell Victoria she was only being included in the expedition because she would find it even more frightening to be left on her own’ - surely that’s a set-up for her playing the crucial part in defeating the Intelligence. What other conceivable route could that possibly take? ‘Victoria watched helplessly’ apparently.
‘Victoria shivered beside him in the darkness, wishing desperately that they’d never left the TARDIS’
‘“Come back, Jamie,” she called. “You said we should go back to the TARDIS”’
‘Victoria tugged urgently at his arm. “Jamie, what are we going to do?”’
‘Victoria clutched Jamie’s arm in fear’
‘Victoria decided that she was more frightened of being left outside than of going in’
A smirking Terrance Dicks: ‘Somewhat to my disgust, there was the onset of feminism, you see. Now, Barry, Barry was okay with this, you know. I feel the right place for the heroine is strapped to the circular saw, screaming her head off ‘til the Doctor comes to rescue her. Or the railway tracks, as the case may be, you see. But it was becoming obvious we couldn’t get away with that any more’
Beginning the End (DVD of The Time Warrior)
Terrance Dicks: ‘the companion is a plot device first and foremost and a character second’
‘“But Doctor?”-A Feminist Perspective on Doctor Who’ by Richard Wallace (Chapter Seven of Ruminations, Perigrinations and Regenerations, edited by Chris Hansen) quoting from Doctor Who Confidential (apparently, though I can’t for life of me track it down so I might have got the footnotes mixed up)
Handwritten note by Sydney Newman to CE Webber on his concept notes for Doctor Who: ‘Need a kid to get into trouble, make mistakes’
http://www.bbc.co.uk/archive/doctorwho/6402.shtml?page=txt
‘“Doctor, there is great danger! You must take me away! You must take me away! Take me away!” This time there was an added note of sheer hysteria in her voice’
‘Victoria was the first in many hundred years to look upon the face of Padmasambvha’
‘Victoria peered curiously into the darkness of the cave mouth […] “Couldn’t we just have a quick look inside the cave?”’
‘Victoria gave a little gasp of excitement. “Jamie! Perhaps it’s the Yeti”’
‘Victoria jumped up and down in excitement’
‘A look of mischief came over Victoria’s face. “Can’t we go to this Sanctum place, and take a peep at him?”’
Her trick to escape incarceration by the monks: ‘Victoria was on her feet, and by the door, her eyes sparkling with mischief’
So much so she gets dubbed: ‘that devil-girl Victoria’
‘Victoria walked towards it, half-fearful, half-fascinated’
‘This ambivalence - a tendency to shy away from the definitive - is in some cases Dicks’s biggest weakness. It’s what leads to the “everybody is right and everybody is wrong” mealy-mouthed crap of The Monster of Peladon or Benny settling the dispute between the lords and peasants. But it’s equally one of his greatest strengths. Given Dicks’s intense suspicion of definitive and unyielding positions, when it comes time for Dicks to craft an idealized hero he ends up with one who is perpetually flexible, hedging, and ambivalent […]The pragmatic ambivalence of Dicks may blind him to genuinely ethically righteous points at times, but it also lets him change his mind and move forward’
Victoria: ‘despite her initial timidity, she was discovering unexpected resources of courage inside herself’; Jamie: ‘He welcomed each new adventure with tremendous gusto’ – I mean, really? Has Dicks read the rest of the script yet? If anything, this is evidence that this is Dicks’s instinctive position on gender roles because it in no way reflects how they actually behave in the story.
Victoria: ‘Victoria looked entranced at the panorama of mountain scenery spread out before them‘; Jamie: ‘As far as Jamie was concerned there were bigger and better mountains at home in Scotland’
‘Jamie went on rummaging in the chest. Victoria wandered over to the scanner and switched it on, hoping to see where the Doctor was off to’ – But then she’s the one who finds it after Jamie’s given up: ‘“Are you sure the trunk’s empty? Really empty?” […] Her fingers touched a scrap of cloth wedged in a corner’
‘Khrisong looked on, half resentful and half amused, as Jamie harried the monks into doing exactly what he wanted. “Och, no, ye great loon. The rope goes over there, and under here. Then tie it there. And make those knots good ones”’
Seriously, she’s constantly instantly bored: ‘“I’m getting very bored,” Victoria said. “Couldn’t we take a look outside?”’. Then there’s ‘Bored, and a little frightened, Victoria wandered round the echoing corridors’ and ‘Bored with waiting in her room’ – that’s the start of two consecutive paragraphs. And then there’s the indicator that she has truly recovered from her hypnosis: ‘I am glad you came and got me out of that cell. I was so bored...’. It’s the very core of her adventurous spirit.
Here’s an odd little side-step - Christopher Eccleston in Doctor Who Confidential (Series 1, Episode 4): ‘The notion is, the Doctor’s lonely and Rose is bored […] she loses all of her boredom when they meet’ – Does this make Victoria a model for the modern companion?
Terrance Dicks: ‘from a writer’s point of the view, the companions have a practical use in that it enables you to split the story from time to time’
More Than Thirty Years in the TARDIS
‘Cunningly, Victoria continued, “Of course, if you’re afraid...”’ - A trick the Doctor later plays on the Great Intelligence: ‘“Why don’t you open those doors?” the Doctor said mockingly. “Afraid to face us, are you?”’
‘Obediently Victoria started back down the mountainside. On second thoughts, she was rather pleased not to be going inside that dark cave’
‘Obediently, the Doctor followed him’ when Jamie insists they go back to the monastery rather than investigate the signal.
Dicksisms
‘a wheezing, groaning sound shattered the peace and stillness of the mountain air’
‘After a moment, a strange groaning noise echoed through the mountain air’
Height Attack!!
The Yeti: ‘It was massive, about seven or eight feet tall’
Are You Sitting Comfortably..?
‘As he did so, his sandalled foot came down on a little silver sphere, pressing it down further into the icy mud’
‘Victoria, like most girls of her time, had had a rather
sheltered upbringing’ – I’m really not sure that this is
true of MOST of the girls of her time, what with all
the ones who had to work from a young age or look
after the endless children in the slum as the mothers
worked. Then there’s all the prostitutes.
‘It was in the nature of females to be contrary’ – I know this is from Jamie’s point of view, but still…


Even freed from a BBC budget, they've gone more Wales than Tibet.
Who are these people? Jamie looks like his cousin from The Mind Robber, Victoria's got Polly's hair from The Macra Terror and Troughton's got Jon Pertwee's costume, stature, body and head. The Monk, to be fair, is a reasonable likeness of Pinter.
Miscellania
There’s been a greater paucity of doubles entendre than I expected, so this is admittedly a bit of a stretch: ‘Path of obedience, indeed. Victoria had her own ideas about that’
Tory Who or double entendre – you decide: ‘Not for the first time, Victoria’s well-developed lungs came to her rescue’
‘Actually neither of them were very impressed with Tibetan food. The pile of yellow rice, covered with strange meats and vegetables, had been palatable enough, especially since they were both ravenous with hunger. But the milkless, unsweetened tea with Yak butter floating in it had been too much for them’ – Who companions are very fussy eaters (well, there was that bit with Jo Grant in Doctor Who and the Day of the Daleks) – is it because they’re point-of-view characters for children?
‘I come from what you would call another dimension. I was exiled into yours, without physical substance; condemned to hover eternally between the stars. Then I made contact with the mind of Padmasambvha. He had journeyed further on the mental plane than any other of your kind. I tempted him, promised him knowledge and long life. Gradually I took him over, and made him my own. But I have rewarded him well’
‘She began to repeat the prayer that Thomni had taught her. “Om, mane, padme, hum, om, mane, padme, hum”’ – is this just a tribute to Planet of the Spiders?
‘The effort required to do battle with the will of the Intelligence was distorting his face’ – does that mean he's gurning?
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